SEO Review: Please critque my website

Looking for an SEO review of my website, what can I improve, I am wanting to rank on page 1 of google for "radar detector reviews" I am very very close.... but not there yet :{

Radar Detector Reviews: Community Reviewing Radar and Laser Detectors

• Get rid of the footer archive links you are using. There are too many.
• Change your title on the homepage from:

Welcome to RadarReviews.Net

to

Welcome to Radar Detector Reviews Community

• Do some keyword research to find some variations on keywords for your niche, but focused on your main keyword and closely related terms. Then expand your welcome message from 1 to 3 paragraphs. Don't color or use italics on all the text. Instead, use bold on radar detector reviews within the text, 1 time (first occurrence).
• Use this tool for your keyword research:
• Free SEO Tools & Search Engine Optimization Software
• Get rid of "Powered by ReviewPost" if you are permitted to do so.
• Replace your "Radio and TV" link in the gold nav bar with "Radar Detector Reviews".
• Get rid of the donations box for guests. Guests won't likely donate, so eliminate it from view, and keep it only for members.
• Get rid of the weather box. It's not what people come to your forum for.
• You should setup some custom rewrite rules for the download links you have in your footer in order to get the actual keywords into the URL for each of the download sections.

How many inbound links do you have with "radar detector reviews", "detector reviews", etc., in the anchor text?

FYI I would change your forum title here and then update your signature here, from:

Radar Detector Reviews: Community Reviewing Radar and Laser Detectors

to

Radar Detector Reviews: Radar and Laser Detectors

or

Radar Detector Reviews

Excellent Review...I played with it a little on what you showed me....I have been going off and on google on page 1 for "radar detector reviews"

Almost there!

How about now? The weather icon I think i want to leave though

You definitely need to get rid of those footer archive links IMO. There are simply too many of them to be effective. There are almost 150 links.

I still think your actual forum title should be refined.

defo get rid of the picture beside the adsense before you lose your account.