Review of my website please!

Can someone take a look at my website and crique it in anyway you see, I like to be hard on myself, let me know if you see anything you would change or add to it!

Thanks:

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Is your homepage getting traffic for all the keyword variations you have in your forum title? If not, I'd reduce it, and correct the *Capitalization*.

Your logo looks more like a banner since it's blocked off from the rest of the site.

You don't have any *hook* or anything that seems to immediately catch interest. Is there a controversial quote from police officials about radar detectors, related legislation that outlaws them, stats on how much money radar detectors keep out of police speeding ticket quotas, an article on why speeding tickets are unfair (arbitrarily pick a particular motorist, police speed themselves even when not during an emergency, etc).

Do you have our sitemap installed? How has your re-indexing been? I don't particularly like your footer archive links since there are too many of them (in my opinion) on every page. I would remove them now.

Are you using our relevant replacements? I see a forum title and description block on your thread pages. I think the relevant replacement here should focus on the thread title and perhaps some first post text.

I like that you include a description of your forum with keywords at the bottom of every page.

With thread pages, I would replace the links to showpost with permalinks instead. My personal strategy would be to not index showpost pages. However, others may feel differently about this strategy.